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凸显文章亮点常用方法 | |||
作者:周红谢 文章来源:本站原创 点击数: 更新时间:2011/10/20 |
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凸显文章亮点常用方法 写作时,如果仅局限在把内容交代清楚的水准上,只选用一些普通的、直截了当的词,或一律使用简单句平铺直叙,那么,这样写出来的文章就会像一碗白开水,呆板、单调,没有可读性。要使文章耐人寻味,有深度,同学们就应尝试使用一引起高级词汇或句型,以凸显文章的亮点,使文章增添文采,给读者(尤其是阅卷留下深刻印象)。具体说来,同学们可尝试以下方法: 一、灵活改变句子开头 在通常情况下,英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”,即主语位于句子开头。但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式,比如使用倒状语或以状语开头等,会使文章增强表现力。如: 1. There stands an old temple at the top of the hill. → At the top of the hill there stands an old temple. 在小山顶上有一座古庙。 2. You can do it well only in this way. → Only in this way can you do it well. 只有这样你才能把它做好。 3. A young woman sat by the window. → By the window sat a young woman. 窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女。 4. The door opened and Mr Smith came in. → The door opened and in came Mr Smith. 门开了,史密斯先生走了进来。 二、避免重复使用同一词语 为了使表达更生动,更富表现力,同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字,就会立刻想起like,事实上,英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。如: 1. I like reading while my brother likes watching television. → I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television. 三、合理使用省略句 合理恰当地使用省略句,不仅可以使文章精练、简洁,而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。如: 1. He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now? → He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now? 他可能很忙,要是这样,我以后再来拜访。要是不忙,我现在可以见他吗? 2. If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go. → If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not. 如果天气好,我们就去;如果天气不好,我们就不去了。 3. She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so. → She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t. 她本可申请这份工作的,但她没有。 四、适当运用非谓语结构 非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构,适当运用非谓语结构,会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。如: 1. When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy. → Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy. 听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。 2. As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her. → Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her. 由于不知道她的地址,我没法和她联系。 3. As he was born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling. → Born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling. 他出生农民家庭,只上过两年学。 |
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