|作者：仕 君 文章来源：本站原创 点击数： 更新时间：2008/11/15||
北京外国语大学 仕 君
【问题】Huazhong University was the largest and most influential mission university in South Central China, it developed from Wenhua Academy (the first college of mission school) that was founded in 1903.
【分析】这是一个典型的逗号句错误，即只用逗号连接两个完整句。此外，本句中的the first college of mission school存在逻辑问题。
【问题】Now, it comprises 18 schools, 9 department and 82 research institutes(centers) and offers 53 doctoral programs and 94 master's degree programs.
【分析】9 department显然应该用复数形式，应该改为9 departments。
【问题】HZU also has many of honorary professors and adjunct professors, such as famous writer Wang Meng, sociologist Zheng Hangsheng, historian Zhang Zhengming, physicist Meng Dazhong, the academician of Chinese Academy Yuan Longping, the chief scientist in the field of Nanometer 973 project Zhang Lide, and the academician of Chinese Academy of Science Ding Xiaqi.(华中师范大学)
【分析】many of honorary professors and adjunct professors中的of应该去掉。本句同位语的处理只得商榷。前面三个同位语即writer Wang Meng, sociologist Zheng Hangsheng, historian Zhang Zhengming, physicist Meng Dazhong不存在问题，但后面三个即the academician of Chinese Academy Yuan Longping, the chief scientist in the field of Nanometer 973 project Zhang Lide, and the academician of Chinese Academy of Science Ding Xiaqi显然存在问题，一是在同位语太长的情况下不宜直接放在所修饰的词前面，而是定冠词the要去掉。建议改为： Yuan Longping, academician of Chinese Academy, Zhang Lide, chief scientist in the field of Nanometer 973 project, and Ding Xiaqi, academician of Chinese Academy of Science.
【问题】The university puts fostering qualified talents in the first place, carries out teaching reform to improves its teaching quality.
【问题】Since the country began its reform and opening-up endeavor, the university had enrolls undergraduate students and graduates students from all parts of China.(华中师范大学)
【分析】这个句子存在两个问题：一是had enrolls应该改为has enrolled；二是应该把graduates一词中的s去掉，改为graduate students。
1. 拼写问题，如：In 1999 and 2000, 3 doctorate these were awarded "Best Hundred Doctorate Theses" in China.(该句中的these应改为theses)
2. 用词不当问题，如：With boundless enthusiasm and enterprising spirit, the faculty and students of Huazhong University are determined to make greater progress o build HZU into a high-level university well-known both at home and abroad.(该句中的make greater progress应改为make greater efforts，才符合上下文。另外，这里还有一个拼写错误，应把o改为to。)
3. 表达不清问题，如：Among a total of over 700 professors and associate professors, there are 3 experts with national achievements and 22 with provincial achievements.(什么样的成就属于国家级即national achievements，什么样的成就属于省级即provincial achievements)？让人感到困惑。)
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